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Suicide

Tue Apr 26, 2005, 11:47 PM
six feet deep dug with a razor
deathbeds in virtical rows
deep scarlette wounds
lined on pale flesh of small wrists

numerous leathal insicions
accenting blue lines of life
pulsing beneath delicate skin
draining their miseries in red

growing colder and weaker
mild psychotic laughter
comes from lungs ravinous for air
as vision is lost to darkness

six feet under, cast out and forgotten
in one of many indentical deathbeds
wounds no longer bleeding
pale flesh rotting away

-Heather

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:iconneptunicos:
omg i love this! its so deep...which is a good thing *hugs*

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~Come! No night to dark, no road to long
Run! No rain to hard, no wind to strong
Pray! No blood to red, no cut to deep
Stay! No pain to bad, no track to steep~
:iconlord1z:
great work but sad

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They call me...K-Dog
:iconbitter-sweetness:
lol...I can picture you ever hugging me but that dosn't matter :P

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- The whole world is watching you die...Enjoy living on top of the world, When you die knowing you lived your life on your knees -
:iconbitter-sweetness:
my work has a tendency to be sad....

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- The whole world is watching you die...Enjoy living on top of the world, When you die knowing you lived your life on your knees -
:iconlord1z:
ya, bad life equals bad results

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They call me...K-Dog
:iconbitter-sweetness:
for the most part

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- The whole world is watching you die...Enjoy living on top of the world, When you die knowing you lived your life on your knees -
:iconlord1z:
I see, sad to hear

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They call me...K-Dog
:iconfilthy-sweet:
:wow: did you right that yourslef? oh my god, the only person iv seen write on a level like this for so long is afriend of mine called Libz. but wow - this is great. so dee - it hit me hard, the amount of times my thoughs ahve been just that!
xxxx

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Divine Infekt[ion]
:heart:
My DeviantART is now; ~resurrekt-infekt
:iconbitter-sweetness:
thanks, I wrote this....I write all the poems that I put in here, its amazing how many people can feel the same for such different reasons...

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- The whole world is watching you die...Enjoy living on top of the world, When you die knowing you lived your life on your knees -

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